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GS - III |
Environment
Refer – IAS Parliament & The Hindu
Ranjana D 21 hours
Evaluate my answers
IAS Parliament 2 hours
Good attempt.
Introduction can be improved. The intro can be simple explanation of wetlands or as with the question " connecting wetland conservation and development".
Highlight the facts. Underline or box.
Reframe and shorten the headings . like " role of wetland conservation in development"
make the subheadings to match with the heading.
Agricultural development is good. but reframe habitation and carbon sequestration into a development perspective.
More points are needed. include SDG.
Reduce the paragraph writing and make them brief and include more points.
